Draw this again - Horikita Maki

Here is my entry for the deviantart's draw this again competition. I really want to join so I draw one of my previous work.

I chose to redraw my Horikita Maki drawing that I drew on Aug 2011. I chose this one because it is my first artwork were someone commented on it. Got 1 comment and no favorites. On this new drawing I want to see how much I improved, how many more favorites and comments I can get compared to last year's work.

I would love to hear comments from you guys

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